This wasn´t funny... but you shouldn´t give up.
"An instruction manual?!" - That was the only funny thing in this cartoon.
You need to make a better concept!
Well, why don´t you try next time to make a movie which parodizes that there are all these monitors just standing in the open air! I mean... You usually wouldn´t expect to find a TV in the forest, er?
Or why don´t you give Sonic a remote control to swich on his favourite TV-show?
THAT would be a concept. The choice of graphics and sounds was more or less avarage...